tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25034970069162452732024-03-12T19:17:09.717-04:00I am Always Write...but often wrongKaren Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.comBlogger156125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-25389468547602347322013-04-01T12:36:00.001-04:002013-04-01T12:36:27.135-04:00MOVED!<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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<span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue", Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;"><em>Today is my official day over at my new blog, </em></span><a href="http://behindthesepages2.blogspot.com/"><span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue", Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;"><em>Behind These Pages</em></span></a><span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue", Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;"><em>, with my cohort and crit partner Tamara. I'll continue to post reminders until the end of the week and then you can find me at my new home. I'll be following everyone on my list. </em></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue", Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;"><em>Take care!</em></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Helvetica Neue", Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;"><em>Karen :-)</em></span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-76830422299478630542013-03-25T18:57:00.003-04:002013-03-25T18:58:14.985-04:00My New Blog Home<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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<span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;">Hi all!</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;">I know I've been MIA, but with work and writing, time has not been my friend. I feel so guilty about abandoning the blog and I usually have things I want to post about, but just don't have time. So when a friend approached me, feeling much like I was feeling about the work that goes into maintaining a blog and suggested we merge blogs, of course I jumped at it. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;">Our new blog will start on April first with the A-Z Blog Challenge. My blog partner and crit partner is Tammy Walsh and our new blog is called Behind Our Pages. So when you see these new people following you, follow us back. It's only us!</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;">I'll have a link up soon and will continue to post here to remind my lovely followers that I have a new home. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: large;">Talk to you soon! :-)</span><br />
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There has always been talk against describing characters skin tones by using food—especially describing people of color. But it was a recent comment I read calling writers who do this as “lazy” that got me thinking.<br />
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I am of the firm belief that whatever will give your reader the clearest, quickest view of your character is a description worth using. Does that mean you have to call a character tall when gangly may do, or describe someone as fat when portly can say the same? No. I still think employing creative ways to describe something otherwise unremarkable is the better way to go. <br />
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With that said, to describe you character as having brown skin isn’t necessarily a bad thing, but saying her skin is the color of cinnamon seems instantly better to me. Brown has so many shades. I get an instant picture when you say cinnamon, or chocolate, mocha, or brown sugar, or honey, or caramel, or coffee…<br />
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To me, it seems a wonderful way to give a person a clear picture of a complexion. Yes, this can become cliché and even lazy, but if the way an author describes her characters is considered lazy, there will be other lazy writing flaws as well. <br />
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I looked up synonyms for the color brown and came up with this: <em><span style="color: #e69138;">amber, auburn, bay, beige, bistre—<strong><span style="color: #ffe599;">WTH?,</span></strong> brick, bronze, buff, burnt sienna, chestnut, chocolate, cinnamon, cocoa, coffee, copper, drab, dust, ecru, fawn, ginger, hazel, henna, khaki, mahogany, nut, ochre, puce, russet, rust, sepia, snuff-colored—<strong><span style="color: #ffd966;">Seriously?,</span></strong> sorrel, tan, tawny, terra-cotta, toast, umber…</span></em><br />
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Some of these are perfectly fine; bronze, chestnut, cocoa, copper, mahogany. But others are just not the thing. I’ve seen sepia use before, quite a lot actually. But the word doesn’t bring a color immediately to mind. I know it’s brown, but what shade? Maybe it’s me. I don’t think it has to be that complicated. I wouldn’t want to read a book where the character was described as having snuff-colored skin, or ochre, or bay, or terra-cotta, or bistre. One of the last books I read described a character as having warm brown skin. That was perfect to me. I didn’t need more. I didn’t need a word that would make me stop reading to look it up and go, “Oh, it means brown.” <br />
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It’s not just for characters of color either. I’ve seen white characters described as milky, creamy, or peachy. Basically, I don’t think there’s anything wrong with using food to paint a picture of your character. There’s a way to make everything work. Would I suggest you refer to your character’s skin tone as brown-sugar or peachy every time you referenced it? Absolutely not. But, I’m not going to be one of those people who rolls her eyes if I see another character of color referred to as mocha, or honey, or chocolate. <br />
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<span style="color: #e69138;">These are just my opinions and I’d love to hear yours. </span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-49396531272320035932012-10-19T10:18:00.000-04:002012-10-19T10:18:17.437-04:00HELP! I Need a New Laptop!!!<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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No, I didn’t punch my laptop, but I really, really, really, want to. It’s been twitching when it first comes on, like it’s having a seizure and it will only stop when I position the lid in exactly the right way. Bad luck for me is that the position is not at all comfortable for me so I spend a lot of time hunched so I can see the screen. It’s not pretty, people. A few more months like this and I’ll have a hump on my back. But if it’s a millimeter off, the screen blinks so rapidly that I know it’s communicating with the devil or something, and I wait for the face of a killer to appear to tell me to turn around, cause he's standing behind me waiting to behead me. <br />
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Okay, so clearly I’m loosing my mind. Not to mention I’m a little too attached to my laptop and the fact that it’s leaving me for some cyber hussy is too much for me to handle. But that’s okay, I’m doing a preemptive strike. I’m leaving it before I can be dumped!<br />
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But I need help. What laptop do you recommend? I have a Compac Pesario and would probably not get another one, but it was a gift. I can tell you what I really want, A Mac Book Pro, but um…I don’t have $3000 just lying around. Not until I sell my book for billions of dollars, the movie rights for trillions and open my theme park for ga-zillions! Until then, I have to budget and I don’t want to go over $1000. <br />
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<span style="color: orange;">Help me! You all know what I mainly need it for, writing. So tell me how much you love your laptop and maybe I can find a new one! Otherwise, I’m heading quickly to a padded cell and no one wants to see that. </span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com13tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-38483395699611835142012-10-09T09:41:00.004-04:002012-10-09T09:41:56.271-04:00Establishing Rules for Your Paranormal Character<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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One of the things my agent asked me to clarify was the rules to my characters abilities. She has psychic dreams and while I never though it needed to be defined more than that, I can now clearly see why it is oh so important. <br />
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The more I began to think about all the paranormal, fantasy or sci-fi stories I’ve read over the years, the more I began to realize they all had rules. Some rules are inherent, such as vampires being unable to go out into the sun, or werewolves changing with the full moon. Others are more mandates, like in Harry Potter, underage wizards aren’t allow to perform magic away from Hogwarts. They are physically capable of performing magic, however they face expulsion. <br />
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Rules in speculative fiction create conflict and raise stakes: the vampire who needs to go out in the daylight to save his one true love; the werewolf locked in a room with his family minutes away from the full moon; Harry Potter performing magic away from school while still underage is brought before an inquisition.<br />
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But on the flip side, establishing rules means exploring what happens when the rules are thrown out. The day-walking vampire or the werewolf who can change at will. <br />
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I thought about all of this while establishing the rules for my psychic dreaming mc. I needed rules for her actual dreams, how they come to her, how she sees them and how she can control them. Then I needed to establish the rules for her interference or lack there of. There has to consequences to just about every action taken, otherwise, why do it? I’m still thinking and tweaking. Hopefully, I’ll get it together. <br />
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<span style="color: magenta;">How important are rules to you? Have you established rules for your speculative characters? Have you taken well known rules, such as no sunlight for vamps and turned them on their ear? </span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com7tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-47908782517090391832012-10-02T09:05:00.000-04:002012-10-02T09:05:06.124-04:00My Pandora Bracelet<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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While I was on vacation the cruise ship had a sale on charms. The best one I found was an owl to represent my love of Harry Potter-lol. So I began to wonder if I’m having such trouble finding something that speaks to me—as I watched other women snatch up charms like they were platinum M&Ms—because I’m not passionate about things. <br />
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I don’t have a favorite song, book, movie, or color. I love too many to narrow it down. Favorite songs change with my mood. Favorite books and movies change with the genre and favorite color changes based on what it is. I think I look nice in red, pale blues and pink, but I wouldn’t decorate my house in those colors. My mother, on the other hand, loves yellow. She likes to wear it, have her appliances in that color and paint her walls that color. <br />
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These are the things I’d love to have on my Pandora bracelet if I could…some I think I can pull off, but others might prove to be tricky. <br />
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A computer<br />
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A Book<br />
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A quill or some other writing instrument <br />
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The Big Bang Theory<br />
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Pride & Prejudice<br />
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The Walking Dead<br />
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So tell me, I can take it. I’m not normal. I know. What would that bracelet look like? A computer, a book, a music note, a quill, an atom, a petticoat and a zombie. Yeah, disturbing.Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com8tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-89370519491376836822012-09-28T13:01:00.004-04:002012-09-28T13:01:56.393-04:00Multicultural Characters in YA<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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I know this is a well-discussed topic, however, I wanted to discuss it a bit more. One of the recent emails I received from my agent—gonna take me a while to get used to writing/saying that. My Agent!—listed all the things she loved about my ms. Diversity was one of them. She mentioned a specific passage she thought was handled well. <br />
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My MC is Cuban-American. She is second generation American and doesn’t speak much Spanish. I thought hard about that when she came to me as this tall, awkward, olive-skinned, Cuban girl with a love of auto mechanics. I don’t speak Spanish, although I’m on my way to learning. I didn’t want her to be CINO: Cuban In Name Only. But I didn’t want my book to be full of my flawed Spanish either-lol. <br />
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I had two things going for me. 1. I was writing this book in English and therefore, I didn’t need that much Spanish and 2. I used to live in Miami. Anyone who’s lived in, visited, flown over southern Florida knows it’s almost like living in Cuba. I had a diverse group of friends, ate Cuban food, danced in Cuban clubs with Cuban men…hem-hem, getting off topic. My point is I decided I had enough knowledge to create a character with first generation, Spanish speaking parents and make it as authentic as my experiences would allow. <br />
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One of my MC’s best friends is Jewish. As he is a side character and we don’t meet any of his family, and I didn’t want to play on the stereotypes, there are only certain things that will point to his Jewish-ness. I did consult with a few of my Jewish friends with some of the things I had him saying and doing. One thing in particular was his Jew-fro. He has very bushy hair and while I couldn’t see that being offensive, I wanted to check and make sure. <br />
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My MC’s other best friend is black. I didn’t really have to consult with anyone as I have personal experience being a 16 yr old black girl-lol. Although, I was never the daughter of a mega-rich rapper who just crossed over to action film star. But even as I tried to stay clear of stereotypes, they are there for a reason. They are based in some truth. <br />
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Years ago I was speaking with a fellow writer who explained why she wasn’t comfortable having a main character of a different race. She said it was because she had no experience being a black, Asian, or Hispanic woman so she couldn’t write them authentically. Well, I’ve never had any experience being a man, a white woman, a vampire, or a werewolf but I write them. That’s what research is for. That’s what exposing yourself to other cultures is for. I think these are things we owe to our readers. Showing them other worlds means showing them worlds with other races outside of the one you currently inhabit. <br />
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<span style="color: magenta;">With all that said, you have to be comfortable to write well. So maybe everything I just said won’t matter to you. But it is a huge market that’s being underrepresented. </span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-16154090969742822882012-09-20T08:33:00.001-04:002012-09-20T08:33:16.476-04:00I HAVE AN AGENT!!!!<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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This story is a year in the making. I queried The Sheldon
Fogelman Agency back in June 2011, sending along three chapters. The request
for the full came in July. At the time I had a few other fulls and partials out
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In the meantime I began writing another book. I continued to
check the forums for any information on all the agents who currently had my
work—you know, just in case there was a scathing update about them that turned
me off. All the while I wrote and bit my nails to the quick!</div>
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Well, a few rejections came in. *Bummer* But my new
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After about two months, I knew I hadn’t heard from a few
agencies, namely The Sheldon Fogelman Agency. I waited another few weeks and
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That scored them major points with me, because not only did
they get back to me, but they got RIGHT back to me—within a few hours. The
submissions coordinator, Amy—who is now an assistant agent—assured me that I
had not been forgotten and had apologized for the long wait. Um…I could totally
be patient, cuz what was the alternative? Telling them that I <i>wouldn’t</i> wait for them to consider my
work? Yeah, cuz I just went crazy, right?</div>
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Over the next five months I sent two more status emails.
Both emails were responded to quickly and both gave me a bit more hope as they
said things like, “The fact that we haven’t made a decision about your
manuscript is a good sign.” Apparently, my manuscript received a very positive
first read and needed to be read by the rest of the staff. Once I knew that, I
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Then one day in April I got an email from Janine Hauber
saying she managed foreign rights at The Sheldon Fogelman Agency and was now
taking on her own clients. She was very interested in working with me if
Platinum Diaries was still available. </div>
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Hell yeah it is! ‘Course, I didn’t write that, but I was
screaming it—in my head since I was standing in line buying some much needed
summer clothes-lol.</div>
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Long story, short—I know, too late, right?—she asked for
revisions and sent me the most wonderful email with her views on what worked
and what didn’t. That email seemed to awaken all these ideas and thoughts I hadn’t
even known I had about my manuscript. That has to be the most awesome thing
about having an agent. She loves my story and can guide me in the right
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We actually had two phone calls. The first, I knew she
wasn’t going to offer, because they are a very collaborative agency—which is
something else I love—and she needed to talk with me first. You know, make sure
I’m not crazy, or in my case, have my crazy well contained-lol. </div>
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We had a great conversation. She answered a lot of my
questions and I answered hers. Then, she took the revisions I made and passed
them on to her colleagues. After they read it, an editorial meeting was set to
review Platinum Diaries as well as the manuscript I’d been working on in the meantime.
While this was going on, I went on a 10-day cruise-lol. I came back from
vacation on September 9<sup>th</sup>. Took the 10<sup>th</sup> to decompress
and emailed Janine on the 11<sup>th</sup>. As luck would have it they were
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She called me at 5pm that night and offered to rep me!!! I
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It was a long wait, but I think it was meant to be. And it
really didn’t feel like a year, not when I kept writing and living and doing
all the other things we writers do to distract ourselves. I’m just really happy
with Janine. It’s a wonderful feeling to talk with someone who is excited about
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Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com25tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-12777548681699676842012-09-12T12:55:00.005-04:002012-09-12T13:00:16.653-04:00When to Disregard a Comment<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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As I’ve been working with critique partners for the past few months, the one thing that’s always come up is when to heed or ignore a comment given about your work. Luckily, with this last project, I haven’t had many comments that I disagreed with. However, in the past I’ve had some feedback that nearly blew me off my feet. <br />
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From rude, to ignorant, to right out of left field—like they’d been reading someone else’s book and confused it with mine. These types of comments are easy to flush away, even though they often stick with you.<br />
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It’s the ones that are kind and thoughtful and full of respect for your work that make you bite your nails to the quick trying to decide if you should follow it or disregard. <br />
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I recently had a comment that had all the makings of a stress induced ulcer, but somehow it didn’t: <br />
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My wonderful crit partner, <a href="http://abbyannis.blogspot.com/">Abby</a> suggested that I delete an entire chapter! What?! Oh no she di’nt! LOL. Now, being on both ends of that type of suggestion, having given similar advice to a crit partner of mine and having been given that advice by Abby, I know she did not offer that advice lightly. To be honest, I only read the first line of her long comment—which went something like this: Please don’t take this the wrong way, but I don’t think this chapter is needed.<br />
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I stopped reading there. Not because I was angry or heartbroken that she didn’t love every last inch of my novel. I stopped to think. I ran through that chapter in my mind and although there were some sweet moments with the male lead and his mother, the chapter didn’t add much to the story. Not only that, but it took away tension from the female lead and from the big reveal at the end. It took about 30 seconds to realize the chapter needed to go. I went back and read Abby’s full comment and her insight made it all the more clear that the chapter should go. I don’t regret cutting it. <br />
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I know that isn’t always the way it goes with comments given about your work. Some people are WAY off the mark. Sometimes you just can’t or don’t want to see the flaws being pointed out to you. And sometimes, you just have to go with your gut. <br />
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<span style="color: magenta;">How do you all do it? Are you a gutster, letting that gut reaction to suggestions be your guide on whether you yay or nay it? Do you gather up other opinions and then let the majority rule? Or do you take all suggestions thrown at you like a giant magnet? :-)</span><br />
<br />Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-77405738947167913302012-05-31T13:36:00.002-04:002012-05-31T13:36:50.520-04:00Sorry for the Long Absence<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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I’ve been away for so long I’m almost ashamed to show my face, or rather, my words, around here. Please forgive my absence. I can’t even blame it on any one particular thing. Not only did I abandon my blog posts, but I stopped reading other’s as well. The only thing I can say is for a long few months I did no writing at all. I was tired. Which I now see was probably some sort of mild depression behind my health and other minor things. <br />
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But I’m back now! I’m feeling great and I’ve been writing steadily for the last couple of months. I’m not going to promise that I’ll post once a week, but I’m going to give it a try. I just wanted to drop in and say, “Hey!” to everyone. Hope the winter treated you all well.Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-51636475573562133392012-01-06T14:46:00.003-05:002012-01-06T15:06:12.120-05:00Be My Nook Friend...<a href="http://i.techrepublic.com.com/blogs/nook-color-20110203.jpg"><img style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 200px; DISPLAY: block; HEIGHT: 316px; CURSOR: hand" border="0" alt="" src="http://i.techrepublic.com.com/blogs/nook-color-20110203.jpg" /></a>I can't believe I've become one of <em>those</em> people...you know, the electronic book people. I was determinded never get one as I love my paper books so much. But, I got a Nook for Christmas...and I think I love it. Please don't tell my books. I haven't broken it to them yet.<br /><br />Now I'm looking for Nook Friends to share books with. Every year it's my goal to read 100 books. I know this may seem like small potatoes for some people who read/skim books with the spead of light, but it takes me time to read, especially when I'm really enjoying a novel. I know I'm backward. Still, for the past few years I've fallen short of my 100 goal, ending at about 75. Now that I have my Nook, I hope to see what others are reading and that way I can add to my list. Maybe this time I'll meet my goal of 100 books read in 2012!<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">If you have a Nook and want to be my friend, send me an email, or leave your email in the comments and friend you!</span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com10tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-59399290745079306742012-01-02T14:53:00.003-05:002012-01-02T15:08:26.655-05:002011 IN REVIEW<a href="http://www.zwani.com/graphics/new_years/images/5new-year-5-2009.gif"><img style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 348px; DISPLAY: block; HEIGHT: 347px; CURSOR: hand" border="0" alt="" src="http://www.zwani.com/graphics/new_years/images/5new-year-5-2009.gif" /></a>• February 3rd slipped on ice and dislocated my right shoulder, resulting in a broken bone. Ouch!<br />• March 8th had surgery to remove bone shard and repair damage.<br />• May 7th went to the Wizarding World of Harry Potter. Beyond Awesome!<br />• July 7th three requests for my full manuscript!<br />• July 15th the final Harry Potter movie came out and I went to my fist midnight viewing! I’m sorry that I waited until the last one to do it. There is such a nerd-energy that I love. Thank you J. K. Rowling for giving me something to be super nerdy about.<br />• July 23rd went to New York to see Daniel Radcliff in How to Succeed in Business Without Trying. Was part of the crowd who sang happy birthday to Dan. The musical was FANTASTIC. I wonder if there is anything he can’t do once he sets his mind to it.<br />• August 3rd turned 39. I’m blessed to have 39 years in this world and be comfortable with who I am. No complaints!<br />• August 23rd the East Coast Earthquake. Nothing more to say about that. LOL<br />• August 27th-28th suffered zero damage from Hurricane Irene. Thank you God!<br />• November 7th test results from endometrial biopsy came back negative!<br />• December 9th pathology results from D&C came back negative.<br />• December 21st my sister came to town for Christmas.<br />• December 23rd head to Delaware to spend the holidays with family.<br />• December 28th bought a new car! 2012 Hyundai Sonata. I love it!<br />• December 31st had a very restful New Year’s Eve.<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">While I have some goals that were not achieved during the year of 2011, namely, weight loss and obtaining an agent (I’m still waiting to hear back from two of those agents who requested from me in July), I think my year has been very good. The days between each of the listed dates were days filled with writing, reading, laughter and love. I don’t have one complaint. Hope all of you had a full and wonderful 2011 and may 2012 be even better! </span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-53338085986655681212011-12-20T12:37:00.002-05:002011-12-20T13:03:14.864-05:00There’s a Thin Line Between Literary Genius and Crap<a href="http://crazy-tattoo-designs.com/drama_mask_tattoo.jpg"><img style="DISPLAY: block; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 350px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 294px; TEXT-ALIGN: center" alt="" src="http://crazy-tattoo-designs.com/drama_mask_tattoo.jpg" border="0" /></a>As my current work in progress nears the end, I have moments where I say to myself, “I can’t believe I wrote this. It’s the most amazing story I’ve ever written. It’s emotional, philosophical, scientific and funny.”<br /><br />And then there are times when I say, “I can’t believe I wrote this! It’s whiney, pretentious, inconceivable and no one is going to get my jokes.” In other words it’s crap.<br /><br />The problem with writing something you think is brilliant is at some point your bubble will get burst. I love this story I’m creating right now. I love the characters, the world and definitely the dialogue, but I guess it has to happen to authors at some point.<br /><br />We are too close to the work and then doubts start to creep in. The only way I know how to handle this is to keep writing. If it turns out it’s crap, you can believe someone WILL tell me. It’s just that I recently noticed that I’d written a chapter without thinking much about it. It came from an emotional place and when I read it back, I thought, this is fan-freakin-tastic!<br /><br />But then a few days later, I lay in bed thinking about that chapter and started to second guessing myself. Is it too emotional? Too preachy? Am I full of crap and therefore my writing must be full of crap too? Inquiring minds want to know, people! LOL.<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">I can’t be alone in this. Please tell me I’m not. At some point do you think you’ve written the next new classic novel? They will make movies, a theme park and everybody will want to be your characters. And then you think this is utter garbage and is probably not good enough to line a bird cage?<br /><br />Tell me I’m not alone.<br /></span><br /><div></div>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-33672099589578216082011-12-15T08:59:00.003-05:002011-12-15T09:05:05.144-05:00A Bit of Downtime<a href="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_IrKWQz5I7QE/TPsWi-3XMhI/AAAAAAAAATM/zEBH_R9E44A/s1600/be-back-soon.png"><img style="DISPLAY: block; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 321px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 302px; TEXT-ALIGN: center" alt="" src="http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_IrKWQz5I7QE/TPsWi-3XMhI/AAAAAAAAATM/zEBH_R9E44A/s1600/be-back-soon.png" border="0" /></a> With all the writing, reading and online shopping I have no time for blogging. Well, the truth is, I've sufficiently fried my brain so I'll be taking a small break.<br /><br />Carry on!<br /><br /><br /><div></div>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-86064537817316536192011-11-28T20:48:00.005-05:002011-11-28T21:26:44.809-05:00Beta Block<a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-N-slQ-eAnQo/ToJJe1PbBgI/AAAAAAAAAHM/0DeNFwCY7xU/s1600/red_editing_pen.jpg"><img style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 500px; DISPLAY: block; HEIGHT: 372px; CURSOR: hand" border="0" alt="" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-N-slQ-eAnQo/ToJJe1PbBgI/AAAAAAAAAHM/0DeNFwCY7xU/s1600/red_editing_pen.jpg" /></a><br /><br /><br /><div></div>I’ve long since come to the understanding that I’m not going to agree with every beta. That would be impossible. Still, I never want to disregard someone’s hard work. Whenever I get feedback that is a bit hard to take, I always take a few days, weeks, or sometimes months, and come back to it with fresh eyes and an open mind. If I still find the comments off, or bizarre, or just completely out of left field, then I disregard them. Sometimes I don’t need days or weeks or months. I know instantly that I’m not going to heed the comment.<br /><br />My most recent venture into Beta Land was with someone I’ve never worked with. I want so desperately to form a core group of good betas, but I’m not sure how to do that other than to give strangers a chance. Yeah, you can read their sample work, and like it enough to say, ‘okay, you seem to have some writing chops, take a whack at my work.’ But in the end, it’s still a person you don’t really know pawing over your manuscript. This is what we as writers have to do, so I’m not really disputing this process. I lucked up three times and found betas who give honest, constructive criticism—beta’s who have helped me immensely. One is sadly no longer with us,<span style="color:#ffccff;"> </span><a href="http://rosepddle.blogspot.com/search/label/Zellie%20Blake"><span style="color:#ff0000;">Zellie</span></a><span style="color:#ff0000;">,</span> whom I miss dearly. The other is <a href="http://lesserkey.blogspot.com/"><span style="color:#ff0000;">Tere </span></a>and the third is <a href="http://abbyannis.blogspot.com/"><span style="color:#ff0000;">Abby</span></a><span style="color:#ff0000;">.</span> I’m looking for two more to have a core group of four. I don’t need a like mind, because sometimes someone who thinks differently will see things I miss. I just need some good tough love.<br /><br />So tell me, do you debate the disagreements with your beta? Generally, I don’t. Unless I truly don’t understand her point, or I think she has misinterpreted something I’ve written. Otherwise, I don’t bother.<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">If any of you out there are interested in swapping manuscripts with me, let me know...or should I be asking for a crit partner? Do you think there is a difference? I’m nearly done my current WIP and will need a reader/critter sometime after the new year!<br /><br /></span>Hope everyone survived the tryptophan coma!Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-47926271314910438502011-11-22T15:51:00.002-05:002011-11-22T16:22:08.557-05:00Looking on the Bright Side<a href="http://www.supercoloring.com/wp-content/main/2010_05/dark-and-bright-side-coloring-page.jpg"><img style="DISPLAY: block; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 335px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 350px; TEXT-ALIGN: center" alt="" src="http://www.supercoloring.com/wp-content/main/2010_05/dark-and-bright-side-coloring-page.jpg" border="0" /></a>After a rejection, I often tell myself, “It wasn’t meant to be.” And even if I really don’t believe that at the time, most of the time, I come to believe it eventually. Yesterday I got a reply on a full that wasn’t an offer, and as sad as that may be, it was the first time I truly felt that it wasn’t meant to be. The email was so gracious and complimentary that I had to smile while reading it. (My mother is under the impression that it wasn’t a rejection, but a postponement-lol.) Here is a bit of the letter:<br /><br /><em>Dear Karen:<br /><br />I like your work so much. It’s odd, quirky and refreshing; all at the same time. It also grabs my attention. Believe me, I read all the time and it takes a lot to become memorable in my book.<br /><br />Still, at this point, I’m just too booked. I don’t want to stand in the way of your success and I don’t believe I could even think about offering you representation until sometime in June – or so. That’s not fair to you. It’s not fair to me. It’s not fair to my current clients.<br /><br />Thus, as sad as it makes me, I’m going to have to pass on this completely fun, exciting work. Now…if you’re still looking for representation come the Summer – 2012 – I’ll hope you’ll let me know…<br /></em><br />I have to say, I’m hoping not to be able to take her up on her offer come summer, but I’m glad to know it’s out there. It’s funny, reading the forums and taking count of all the new clients this agent has just taken on, I began to feel like this may not be the place for me. I don’t want to take anything away from the agent; however, I began to wonder if I’d get lost in the crowd. So, I think it was truly meant to be that I was passed over.<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">Have any of you ever received a rejection and thought, yeah, that was probably for the best? </span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-50156380104428087092011-11-17T09:54:00.004-05:002011-11-17T10:01:50.153-05:00Implausible<a href="http://images.wikia.com/phineasandferb/images/2/2d/Captain_Implausible_title.jpg"><img style="DISPLAY: block; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 525px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 293px; TEXT-ALIGN: center" alt="" src="http://images.wikia.com/phineasandferb/images/2/2d/Captain_Implausible_title.jpg" border="0" /></a>While reading, I came across a chapter that I just couldn’t believe. Yes the story was about paranormal activities and entities, however, even in speculative fiction the reader needs to believe that what’s happening is plausible. I was having a hard time buying into the scene and the steps the characters took to solve the problem.<br /><br />Reading urban fantasy, dystopian or sci-fi means the reader has to come to the novel with a bit of suspended belief. We know that werewolves don’t exist, but we are willing to accept this for the sake of the story. However, if said werewolf suddenly sprouts wings and starts to fly (when it hasn’t been established that he is a flying werewolf), then we as the reader will most likely go, “Um…WTH is going on here?”<br /><br />My point; think about what you are writing and make sure that it is logical within the world you have created. Don’t just have characters acting in a certain way just because it will be easier to get the plot moving along. Make sure that normal, rational people will say, “yeah, I can understand why she did that.” And if they can’t, make sure you have truly explained why your character has done something so seemingly foolish.<br /><br />It’s tricky because you want your characters to be active and not passive, so sometimes they are going to do things that make the reader yell, “No dummy! Don’t do that!” That is different from a situation where just about every reader is scratching his head thinking, um…why in the world did she just do that? And even your explanation doesn’t make it plausible.<br /><br />We’ve all seen it. The horror movie where the people are safe inside their home and suddenly someone spots something out in the dark woods.<br /><br />“There’s someone out there.”<br />The crazy person says, “Let’s go check it out.”<br /><br />Am I the only one who thinks it’s ridiculous to leave a nice, warm, well-lit home complete with possible weapons and a working phone to go looking around in the woods for a lurking stranger? Who do these people think they are going to find? It’s NEVER going to be Publisher’s Clearing House with a big check.<br /><br />I know you have all read/seen this type of thing before and you’ve said to yourself—or perhaps out loud—“No one would EVER do that!”<br /><br />Tell me all about it!<br /><br /><div></div>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-59330940623507780202011-11-09T10:31:00.002-05:002011-11-09T10:39:27.031-05:00Profess Your Love....<a href="http://horoscope.com/horoscope/images/icon_game-love-compatibility.jpg"><img style="DISPLAY: block; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 200px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 240px; TEXT-ALIGN: center" alt="" src="http://horoscope.com/horoscope/images/icon_game-love-compatibility.jpg" border="0" /></a> I haven’t done this in a while, so I think it’s time to share the love. Here are some random things I’m in love with right now.<br /><br /><strong>The only rules:</strong> No need to tell me that you love your kids, your husband or your mommy…we know this. I want to know about something that’s putting a smile on your face today.<br /><br /><strong>For me:<br /></strong><br />I love that my biopsy just came back negative! GO ME! :-)<br /><br />I love my cinnamon plug-in from Yankee Candle. Makes my house smell like Thanksgivings and Christmas all rolled into one.<br /><br />I love that I get paid tomorrow instead of Friday because the banks are closed for Veteran’s Day.<br /><br />I love the OPI shellac nail polish. It’s SO glossy and it lasts for weeks!<br /><br />I love that I no longer look like I’m storing nuts in my cheeks. (Had two of my wisdom teeth extracted on Friday.)<br /><br />I love the Pumpkin ice cream is back!<br /><br />And this one isn’t really a love of mine, more of a question. How many of you have tried the McRib from McDonalds? I’ve never had one, but people talk about it like it’s the best thing ever invented (doubtful). Years ago (<em>years</em>) when the McRib first came out, I asked my boyfriend—at the time—for a bite of his. He said no! Can you believe that? One of the many reasons he’s an ex.<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">So what do you love now? The McRib? Lol. Let me know, so I can share your love too. </span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-37316605236075612422011-11-01T11:42:00.001-04:002011-11-01T11:46:17.788-04:00I’ve Decided Not to Listen to Audio Books…<a href="http://www.picturesof.net/_images_300/A_Man_Plugging_His_Ears_Royalty_Free_Clipart_Picture_100416-009609-387053.jpg"><img style="DISPLAY: block; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 279px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 300px; TEXT-ALIGN: center" alt="" src="http://www.picturesof.net/_images_300/A_Man_Plugging_His_Ears_Royalty_Free_Clipart_Picture_100416-009609-387053.jpg" border="0" /></a> …Well, audio books for YA, anyway. I’m about to make a generalization, so bear with me. I listen to a lot of audio books, because it allows me to “read” while working. Usually, your boss frowns upon you reading at your desk when you’re not on break, but as they allow radios in the office, they don’t care what I listen to as long as it doesn’t interfere with my work.<br /><br />My usually audio books consist of my guilty pleasures, regency romance or some chick-lit. But every so often, I get a YA book in audio form.<br /><br />The problem I’ve found with most of these audio books—well, at least more times than not—is that the voice is terrible. With the exception of a few, most YA audio books I have read have narrators that make the mc’s sound like babies, or at least far too young for the teens they are supposed to be voicing.<br /><br />I’ve been listening to <em>The Name of the Star</em> by Maureen Johnson. Her characters are spunky and witty with a touch of sarcasm. The narrator makes the mc sound like she’s on the verge of laughing at any moment, so the sarcastic lines don’t have the same conviction. She’s bubbly when she should be displaying dry humor, and the character doesn’t sound as spunky as the words make her. Fortunately, I actually LISTEN to the words and have managed to tune out the most annoying parts of the narrator.<br /><br />I know I take this chance when listening to a book over reading it, but I find that I have more problems with narrators when it’s a YA novel. It was only when I started listening to this last novel that I realized this was the reason I read most of my YA and listen to Adult fiction. Not to mention, I think I pay much more attention to YA novels than I do to adult ones. Most of my adult novels have been recommended to me and I don’t even really know what they’re about before I pop in the disc. With YA, I’ve read the summary, looked up the author (if I haven’t read or heard of them before) and I check out who represents them.<br /><br />So now, this is my decision—I’m sure you were all waiting on the edge of your seats—I won’t listen to anymore YA audio books. There, I said it. I’m not going to say I’ll never do it again, because I never say never-lol.<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">How do you guys feel about audio books? Is there a certain genre you are willing to forgo the page and grab the CD? Or does it even matter to you? If you do listen to audio books like me, do you find a difference between YA and adult? My inquiring mind wants to know.<br /></span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-68795495640516526342011-10-25T15:47:00.001-04:002011-10-25T15:48:39.351-04:00Quotes, Yea or Nay?<a href="http://www.presentationmagazine.com/powerpoint-templates/00326/468slide1.jpg"><img style="DISPLAY: block; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 468px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 351px; TEXT-ALIGN: center" alt="" src="http://www.presentationmagazine.com/powerpoint-templates/00326/468slide1.jpg" border="0" /></a>While reading a novel the other day, I noticed that each chapter started with a quote. The quotes were either from a poem or something a famous person said that may have been relevant to the chapter or the novel as a whole.<br /><br />For what it’s worth, I don’t like it, (but who cares what I think, right?). I get it. I’ve seen quotes and songs that seem to speak to the novel I’m working on.<br /><br />Still, I don’t like it. *folds arms over chest like a stubborn toddler*<br /><br />It pulls me out of the story. As someone who is naming each chapter in my current novel with a specific title, even that pulls me out of the story somewhat. I’ll take that over the quote, especially if it’s long. I’ve seen some chapters start with a quote that’s a good five lines long. If I’m reading the book, I skip right over this. If I’m listening to the book, it annoys me that I have to sit through this before I can get back into the story. I don’t mind them in the very beginning, and have seen occasions where the quote has fit so well that I’m a little jealous-lol. Not much, though.<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">So what I want to know is how do you all feel about quotes? Do you use them in your writing? Do you read them at the start of each chapter, or are you like me and breeze right past them? </span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com8tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-23441717433634000952011-10-11T09:53:00.001-04:002011-10-11T09:55:15.792-04:00Research<a href="http://www.idgresearch.com/wp-content/themes/idg-one/images/globe-puzzle.jpg"><img style="DISPLAY: block; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 300px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 283px; TEXT-ALIGN: center" alt="" src="http://www.idgresearch.com/wp-content/themes/idg-one/images/globe-puzzle.jpg" border="0" /></a>One of the characters in my new wip develops a medical condition that I needed to research. Fortunately, I work in a hospital with three of the greatest doctors I’ve ever met, so I don’t have to only go by what I find on the internet.<br /><br />Doing research is always fun, well, most times. I like learning new things, but research for novels seems different to me. It can sometimes shape the way a story is told. While gathering information on this medical condition, (Atrial Fibrillation), I’ve had to go back and add minor things to the story, like the way my character reacts, physically and emotionally to strenuous activity. And learning about this condition has helped me fine tune the ending.<br /><br />The one thing I’ve discovered about doing research for novels is that I usually have far more information than I’ll ever need. I’d rather have it that way then the other way around. Still, having more than needed is good for back story. Just recently, I had to research, “How to cook a possum,” for this wip. Let’s just say, it was SCARY!<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">How much research do you do when crafting a novel? And do you trust what you find on the internet?</span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-9751183041830087392011-10-03T09:25:00.004-04:002011-10-03T09:52:32.799-04:00How Much Broken English is too Much?<a href="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ZaUwXHQ4xd4/TcTTidY64yI/AAAAAAAAABc/jywrYv0DAV4/s1600/3190435340_9223d99ccf.jpg"><img style="DISPLAY: block; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 500px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 358px; TEXT-ALIGN: center" alt="" src="http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-ZaUwXHQ4xd4/TcTTidY64yI/AAAAAAAAABc/jywrYv0DAV4/s1600/3190435340_9223d99ccf.jpg" border="0" /></a>Let me explain. As writers, we all know that real people don’t speak in complete sentences, or often times with complete words. My current wip has a lot of broken English in the dialogue. The main male character is a—for lack of a better word—hillbilly.<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;">On a side note, most of my friends and family knows that I am terribly afraid of hillbillies. I suffer from Hillbill-a-phobia, if you will. I’m not just speaking of country/southern people. Some of my closest friends and family are county/southern. I’m talking about the people who view the film DELIVERANCE as a how-to manual. Those are the people who scare the ba-jesus out of me. So, it’s a shock to people when I tell them I’m working on a story where the love interest is a hillbilly. Hell, it shocked me too!<br /></span><br />So anyway, this boy slaughters the English language every time he opens his mouth. I don’t want to have a bunch of garbled dialogue in this story where my readers will be scratching their heads and will eventually put the book down because they can’t understand what one of the main characters is saying.<br /><br />I think about it like how J.K. Rowling wrote Hagrid. He butchered words, but he didn’t have much dialogue, as he wasn’t one of the main three characters in the Potter series.<br /><br />Fortunately, my male lead is a quiet guy, usually speaking in clipped sentences. Below is an exchange between the male lead and some of the other hillbilly boys. Let me know what you think.<br /><br />~*~<br />Wulf holds up his hand, and all talking stops. “Despite the fact that y’all seem ready to fetch the preacher man so’s he can marry you, she gone. Whatchu want me to do ‘bout it? Now think hard ‘fore you answer that.” Several seconds of silence linger in the wake of his question.<br />Samuel-Adam is the first to speak. “I liked her. Bring’er back.”<br />A scatter of agreement follows the five year olds’ demand. Wulf sighs and rolls his eyes toward the ceiling.<br />“I’m gonna close my door and get on wit’ my nap. When y’all come up wit’ a plan—a logical plan—wake me.”<br />Fitch glares Wulf. “You don’t seem like you care at all that she gone.”<br />“I don’t.”<br />~*~<br /><span style="color:#993399;">Have you had a situation like this, where a lot of your dialogue needs to reflect and accent, slang, or poor grammar? How did you handle it?</span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-32120489980309923632011-09-26T17:22:00.002-04:002011-09-26T18:34:33.104-04:00The Story in the Music<a href="http://ldsblogs.com/media/blogs/music//music.jpg"><img style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 390px; DISPLAY: block; HEIGHT: 293px; CURSOR: hand" border="0" alt="" src="http://ldsblogs.com/media/blogs/music//music.jpg" /></a>How many of you listen to music while you write? Show of hands…one, two—okay, a lot of you. If possible, I always listen to music while I write, if I can’t, then I prefer nothing at all. Mostly, I try to stick to music which has some relevance to the story I’m currently working on, or inspires the story in some way. If there isn’t anything fitting, then I keep the music benign. What I mean by benign is that the song choices can easily fade into the background while I focus on writing. When I’m really into a certain part, an entire CD will play and I won’t even notice.<br /><br />So, the other day I had my Pandora up on my iPod. The Pandora station was on Today’s Pop Music, because nothing is easier for me to drown out than Pop music. No disrespect to Pop, just my opinion. Suddenly, a Taylor Swift song comes on. I’m not a huge Swift fan, if one at all, but I have to respect someone so young and so talented. The song playing was <em>You Belong With Me</em>, and it proved my former point wrong. Because even though Taylor is a country singer, her songs are Pop music…and this song did not fade to the background.<br /><br />If you’re not familiar with the song it’s basically about a girl in love with her best friend, (<em>who hasn’t been?</em>), and the best friend has no clue. <em>They never do</em>. But the lyrics really caught my attention. I’ve heard this song before because they used to play it on the only station that comes in clearly in my office—unless I want to listen to sports. Not!—but I’ve never paid much attention to it.<br /><br />It’s this line that makes me stop writing: <em><span style="color:#cc33cc;">Laughing on a park bench, thinking to myself, hey, isn’t this easy.<br /></span></em><br />I could see the story, just pictured two teens sitting on a bench, carefree. She’s in love with him. He’s clueless…<em>or maybe not</em>. I love stories where friends get together. I’ve written a couple and will probably write more. I’ve had that experience when my now deceased ex-fiancé, (okay, I know that was confusing. He was my fiancé from the age of twenty to twenty-three. We broke up and he passed away four years ago. Got it? Good), professed his undying love to me. He was in love with me from the time we were seventeen and I was clueless. Yes, <strong>CLUELESS</strong>-lol.<br /><br />Maybe that line and this song spoke to me because of how my cluelessness turned into my first love, or maybe it’s because I write stories for young adults and this is such a YA song/story. I don’t know, but I love when I hear that song and can actually see the entire 200+ page novel. I think Swift did an excellent job co-writing this. It sounds like a teen. She could have made it convoluted, where you wonder what the heck the song is about. Maybe that has something to do with her being a teen, writing for teens about teen issues.<br /><br /><span style="color:#cc33cc;">Are there any songs you’ve heard that are visual to you? Or have you heard a song that has inspired a novel? Tell me all about it!</span>Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-75340533725700781742011-09-19T19:29:00.004-04:002011-09-19T19:37:16.921-04:00Frazzled!<a href="http://www.chumpysclipart.com/images/illustrations/xsmall2/1945_picture_of_a_frazzled_woman_with_lots_of_paperwork_several_computers_and_a_bag_of_money.jpg"><img style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 350px; DISPLAY: block; HEIGHT: 271px; CURSOR: hand" border="0" alt="" src="http://www.chumpysclipart.com/images/illustrations/xsmall2/1945_picture_of_a_frazzled_woman_with_lots_of_paperwork_several_computers_and_a_bag_of_money.jpg" /></a>It’s been a long time since I’ve posted anything. My days have been so busy lately and I feel like I don’t have enough hours. I’ve been looking for a new place to live, a new car and a new love…well, I’m not actually looking for the latter, just opening myself up for good things to come.<br /><br />Still, all that searching, plus getting up at 0530 <span style="font-size:78%;">(I have to list it as military time because it’s too early for civilians to get up unless they are crazy…which I am) </span>to go to the gym. By the time I get home from work, I just want to write. My new wip is taking over my brain and all of my free time.<br /><br />But I’m making myself this promise. I will post at least once a week. Mondays. Unless I have an extra post that simply can not wait. Life is about juggling. I’m trying to toss lots of balls in the air and not drop any. I love blogging so I don’t want this to be one of the balls I drop.<br /><br /><span style="color:#993399;"><strong>Leave me a comment and let me know how you stay organized. Believe me, it will help.<br /></strong></span><br />Thanks!Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503497006916245273.post-85272476290607204732011-07-26T20:16:00.002-04:002011-07-26T20:39:48.888-04:00What Gives You Pause?<a href="http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ7kEQzdD0CqUT2AOXSee96RQdQOoBWjPkArIKpD3VQnXz2CDzYWw"><img style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN: 0px auto 10px; WIDTH: 218px; DISPLAY: block; HEIGHT: 232px; CURSOR: hand" border="0" alt="" src="http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ7kEQzdD0CqUT2AOXSee96RQdQOoBWjPkArIKpD3VQnXz2CDzYWw" /></a>As I trudge through my love/hate relationship with Query Hell, I read a lot of posts/comments/blogs while doing my research. I’ve moved beyond the wide-eyed aspiring author who only wants someone to love my work and take it on. I’m now the author who asks, “Are you the best person for my novel?”<br /><br />Now, there are glaring reasons why one would say no to an agent:<br /><br />They charge fees.<br />They have an editorial business that they push on rejected authors.<br />They have a known history of unprofessional behavior.<br />They have bad reviews from other clients/submitters. *This is why scrolling writer’s forums are so invaluable.*<br /><br />While there are many more reasons to remove an agent from your list, (which happens to be the question all searching authors should ask, “Do you deserve to be on my list?”), what this post is about is what gives you pause?<br /><br />I’m talking about the little things that aren’t the obvious reasons to say no, but may raise a red flag.<br /><br />For example, I was researching an agent the other day and couldn’t find much information about the agent online. I kept going to the sparse website rereading everything posted. I kept looking for different ways to Google said agent, and reading what little information I found. Then I saw the agent’s email address. It was through AOL.<br /><br />Is this a reason to keep the agent off my list? Not necessarily. Does it seem odd that an agent—who has been in the business for several years—doesn’t have an email address linked to their business? Little bit, yeah. The AOL address was enough to give me pause, and on its own probably wouldn’t be enough to keep the agent off my list. But combine that with the lack of information, and this agent didn’t make it on my list.<br /><br />So tell me, have you come across something while researching an agent that made you pause and rethink sending them your query? Was it so-so feedback from other authors? Typos on their webpage? Or comments made on their blog that rubbed you the wrong way?Karen Denisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15154015690643682525noreply@blogger.com3